www - One mark from a B - this contains many good points, examples and references to theory.
ebi - it also contains some basic errors: confusing The Guardian and Daily Mail for exampl
- Your examples also lack detail in places : be specific. you don't explain your point on Kidulthood which is a shame.
LR - Your first paragraph is huge - I'd like to see an into paragraph that introduces your case study and answers the question. Write this now!
